The first draft:Educational system in my country

         *Every country has its own educational system. Educational system  is a mirror that reflects the culture ,social structure, and values of any country. According to this system ,we can determine our students` levels. If we want our students to be good , we will need a well organized educational system. But If we want them to be bad , we will need for sure an unorganized educational system. For example Egypt(my country) is a great country with a specific educational system. This system cannot be the same to any other country. 

            *Educational system in Egypt has a lot of advantages ans disadvantages. On the one hand, one of the advantages is that education is for free in Egypt. People don`t have to give schools any money . They only buy the books of the subjects and even if they have enough money, they can easily take or borrow old books for free. In Egypt, older people have the opportunity to attend college, because Egyptians believe that "you are never too late to learn".

             *On the other hand,educational system in Egypt has also several drawbacks. Such as, The number of students in the class is very big. Every class room has more than 40 student and the teachers need to keep their eyes on all the students at the same time.And make sure that all of them understood the lesson. There are also difficult exams for students at secondary schools. Every year students argue these exams.

                *In my point of view , Egypt has a bad educational system that will lead to its destruction . Education should support national unity and lead to social, economical, and cultural improvement of the people . But in Egypt , we don`t have that type of education. We don`t have enough teachers or laboratory equipment, and the buildings are often not in good condition. I`m sure that If we manage to The self control, we will give up hobbies, sports, ans social life. Our educational system needs to be well organized ,before it spends on our children .