الأربعاء، 6 أكتوبر 2010

Air Pollution In Egypt

            Pollution is quickly becoming a serious problem all over the world,in the air, the water, the soil, and many other ways.The air pollution in Egypt is a matter of serious concern. Air pollution is the material ,whether chemicals, particulates, or biological materials, that is introduced into the atmosphere by humans or human products.This is starting to have adverse effects and causes on the environment such as causing acid rain ,smog, and a wide variety of health problems . Air pollution occurs when toxins and contaminants are emitted into the atmosphere. Not only is the earth affected by air pollution , but it causes health issues. Most people think that air pollution is a problem that only environmentalists worry about , but the sad fact is it is a reality that we all have to face. We cause more problems every day than we come up with solutions. 
           Air pollution is caused by a wide variety of things such as: Factories burn fossil fuels which cause air pollution. The burning of oil and coal contributes to smog. this air pollution destroys plants ,damages buildings.Petroleum release hydrocarbons and various particulates that pollute the air. Power lines also creates air pollution . Radioactive fallout causes air pollution from the nuclear energy dispersed which is a dust. Mining operations causes air pollution by releasing a variety of particles. The extremely old vehicles cause the carbon present in fuel to react with oxygen ineffectively during combustion , producing carbon monoxide. Industrial facilities such as factories and plants emit toxic gases into the atmosphere. Also burning solid and agricultural waste cause air pollution. 
           Air pollution causes a number of effects that become wide and large day after day. Such as environmental effects that acid rain forms when gases like dioxide and nitrogen oxide react with chemicals in the atmosphere to form acidic compounds . Acid rain can harm drinking water and our life . Carbon monoxide removes oxygen from the bloodstream and causes things life fatigue, headache, and disorientation. Skin disease are caused from radiation. Smog represents the integration of smoke and fog.It can damage the lungs, cause breathing problems and affect the nose and eyes . Air pollution leads to a common phenomenon known as "The green house"effect on the planet. The holes in the ozone layer increases the exposure to the sun`s harmful rays. If the ozone layer is depleted enough , the sun will begin to burn the earth , causing problems and death for all living things. 
             Many different methods of clarifying and improving our air are being tested every year. The best measure to improve our air is to eliminate fossil fuels and replace the internal-combustion engine. Fossil fuels are burned and used as a sources of energy . New technologies are trying to use emissions from fossil fuel generation by converting the captured CO2 into products such as chemicals, carbonates, plastics, fuels, building materials ,and other aspect of carbon capture. We also can convert rice husks into bio-gas for domestic use. We should provide simple environmental awareness . Activating policies dealing with air pollution and climate change. Triggering regular planting campaigns around Egypt.
             As human, we are responsible for the damage we do, and if we do not find a way to clear the world we live on, we will not have our natural resources for very long , This is a problem we have to worry about no matter where we live. Air pollution can causes diseases and problems and even death to people . If air pollution is not put into remissions, it could pose many risks and dangerous , both environmental and physiologically . The earth is great at cleaning the air on its own . However, air pollution has grown so much, the earth can no longer clean all of it.

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  1. Thanks Aya for writing the draft and sending it. But I want you to use your own words because many words in your essay are difficult to be understood. Also, I dont wont you to copy whole paragraphs from the internet. You can read about the topic in the internet, then use your own information, content and write your essay

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  2. Comments on the first part of the essay
    Pollution is quickly becoming a serious problem all over the world,in the air, the water, the soil, and many other ways.The air pollution in Egypt is a matter of serious concern. Air pollution is the material ,whether chemicals, particulates, or biological materials, that is introduced into the atmosphere by humans or human products.This is starting to have adverse effects and causes on the environment such as causing acid rain ,smog, and a wide variety of health problems . Air pollution occurs when toxins and contaminants are emitted into the atmosphere. Not only is the earth affected by air pollution , but it causes health issues. Most people think that air pollution is a problem that only environmentalists worry about , but the sad fact is it is a reality that we all have to face. We cause more problems every day than we come up with solutions.
    Air pollution is caused by a wide variety of things such as: Factories burn fossil fuels which cause air pollution. The burning of oil and coal contributes to smog. this air pollution destroys plants ,damages buildings.Petroleum release (s) hydrocarbons and various particulates that pollute the air. Power lines also creates( omit the "s") air pollution . Radioactive fallout causes air pollution from the nuclear energy dispersed which is a dust (it is a difficult sentence). Mining operations causes ( omit the "s") air pollution by releasing a variety of particles. The extremely old vehicles cause the carbon present in fuel to react with oxygen ineffectively during combustion (wrong spelling) , producing carbon monoxide. Industrial facilities such as factories and plants emit toxic gases into the atmosphere. Also burning solid and agricultural waste cause air pollution.

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  3. comments on the second part
    Air pollution causes a number of effects that become wide and large day after day. Such as environmental effects that acid rain forms when gases like dioxide and nitrogen oxide react with chemicals in the atmosphere to form acidic compounds . Acid rain can harm drinking water and our life . Carbon monoxide removes oxygen from the bloodstream and causes things life fatigue, headache, and disorientation (rewrite the sentence in a correct way). Skin disease (add"s") are caused from radiation. Smog represents the integration of smoke and fog.It can damage the lungs, cause breathing problems and affect the nose and eyes . Air pollution leads to a common phenomenon known as "The green house"effect on the planet (run on sentence). The holes in the ozone layer increases (omit the "s") the exposure to the sun`s harmful rays. If the ozone layer is depleted enough , the sun will begin to burn the earth , causing problems and death for all living things.
    Many different methods of clarifying and improving our air are being tested every year. The best measure to improve our air is to eliminate fossil fuels and replace the internal-combustion engine. Fossil fuels are burned and used as a sources (omit the "s")of energy . New technologies are trying to use emissions from fossil fuel generation by converting the captured CO2 into products such as chemicals, carbonates, plastics, fuels, building materials ,and other aspect of carbon capture. We also can convert rice husks into bio-gas for domestic use. We should provide simple environmental awareness . Activating policies dealing with air pollution and climate change. Triggering regular planting campaigns around Egypt.
    As human (add "s"), we are responsible for the damage we do, and if we do not find a way to clear the world we live on, we will not have our natural resources for very long , This is a problem we have to worry about no matter where we live. Air pollution can causes omit the "s")diseases and problems and even death to people . If air pollution is not put into remissions (use a simpler word), it could pose many risks and dangerous(wrong word) , both environmental and physiologically . The earth is great at cleaning the air on its own (I don’t understand this sentence). However, air pollution has grown so much, the earth can no longer clean all of it.

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  4. Air pollution causes a number of effects that become wide and large day after day. Such as environmental effects that acid rain forms when gases like dioxide and nitrogen oxide react with chemicals in the atmosphere to form acidic compounds . Acid rain can harm drinking water and our life . Carbon monoxide removes oxygen from the bloodstream and causes things life fatigue, headache, and disorientation (rewrite the sentence in a correct way). Skin disease (add"s") are caused from radiation. Smog represents the integration of smoke and fog.It can damage the lungs, cause breathing problems and affect the nose and eyes . Air pollution leads to a common phenomenon known as "The green house"effect on the planet (run on sentence). The holes in the ozone layer increases (omit the "s") the exposure to the sun`s harmful rays. If the ozone layer is depleted enough , the sun will begin to burn the earth , causing problems and death for all living things.
    Many different methods of clarifying and improving our air are being tested every year. The best measure to improve our air is to eliminate fossil fuels and replace the internal-combustion engine. Fossil fuels are burned and used as a sources (omit the "s")of energy . New technologies are trying to use emissions from fossil fuel generation by converting the captured CO2 into products such as chemicals, carbonates, plastics, fuels, building materials ,and other aspect of carbon capture. We also can convert rice husks into bio-gas for domestic use. We should provide simple environmental awareness . Activating policies dealing with air pollution and climate change. Triggering regular planting campaigns around Egypt.
    As human (add "s"), we are responsible for the damage we do, and if we do not find a way to clear the world we live on, we will not have our natural resources for very long , This is a problem we have to worry about no matter where we live. Air pollution can causes omit the "s")diseases and problems and even death to people . If air pollution is not put into remissions (use a simpler word), it could pose many risks and dangerous(wrong word) , both environmental and physiologically . The earth is great at cleaning the air on its own (I don’t understand this sentence). However, air pollution has grown so much, the earth can no longer clean all of it.

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  5. your essay is good one . each paragraph begin with a topic sentence but it is very long

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  6. Well done aya , your essay is avery good one, it have aspecific ideaand clear purpose.
    your paragraphs begins with a topic sentence, dut there are many words to understand
    good luck with the final draft AYOUA

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