The first draft:my dream job

            

          *It is very important to find your dream job. Everyone has to choose or determine their dream job . What kind of job they want?. After determining the job , they started to have the right education for it. For example: If you want to be a doctor, you must study medicine. To find your dream job isn`t very easy, but it needs a lot of work , study and specific skills. Nowadays,Jobs require specific skills like computer skills and speaking a foreign language. If you can`t find your dream job, you can go to a career counselor to help you .

        *My dream job is to be a translator. I hope that I can work as a translator especially from English to Arabic. As i love English so much. So i decided to study at the faculty of education in English department. I think my education in this faculty will help me a lot to find my dream job. I know that my study isn`t enough and i need a lot of courses to be profession. But i will keep trying and studying to achieve my dream. There are a lot of ways to find my own job. For example : I can use the websites. If you use the internet , you will find more and more empl0oyers are advertising job openings on their computer websites . You can choose your job freely.

         *To find a job , especially your dream job, is varies from country to country and from person to person. There is generally less job in the world and that is because of the decrease in manufacturing jobs. So many people have to take over their fathers in their jobs.Don`t be upset and give up.Try to know what kind of job you want, and make sure that you have the right education for it. You can`t find your job without suffering and studying.

My draem job(the out line)

Introduction:

• what kind of job you want?
• Do you have the right education for it?

Body:

• My own dream job.
• Work as a translator.
• How can i achieve my dream.

Conclusion:

• To find a job it varies from country  to country.
• It is important to discover your dream job.

success Quotes

• No road is too long for him who advances slowly and does not hurry, and no attainment is beyond his reach who equips himself with patience to achieve it.

• I don't believe you have to be better than everybody else. I believe you have to be better than you ever thought you could be.

•  Success is a journey, not a destination. The doing is often more important than the outcome.

•  Making your mark on the world is hard. If it were easy, everybody would do it. But it's not. It takes patience, it takes commitment, and it comes with plenty of failure along the way. The real test is not whether you avoid this failure, because you won't. it's whether you let it harden or shame you into inaction, or whether you learn from it; whether you choose to persevere.

The final draft

  *Every country has its own educational system. Educational system  is a mirror that reflects the culture ,social structure, and values of any country. According to this system ,we can determine our students` levels. If we want our students to be good , we will need a well organized educational system. But If we want them to be bad , we will need for sure an unorganized educational system. For example Egypt(my country) is a great country with a specific educational system. This system cannot be the same to any other country. 

            *Educational system in Egypt has a lot of advantages ans disadvantages. On the one hand, one of the advantages is that education is  free in Egypt. People don`t have to give schools any money . They only buy the books of the subjects and even if they have enough money, they can easily take or borrow old books for free. In Egypt, older people have the opportunity to attend college, because Egyptians believe that "you are never too late to learn".

             *On the other hand,educational system in Egypt has also several drawbacks,such as, The number of students in the class is very big. Every class room has more than 40 students and the teachers need to keep their eyes on all the students at the same time,and make sure that all of them understood the lesson. There are also difficult exams for students at secondary schools. Every year students argue these exams.

                *In my point of view , Egypt has a bad educational system that will lead to its destruction . Education should support national unity and lead to social, economical, and cultural improvement of the people . But in Egypt , we don`t have that type of education. We don`t have enough teachers or laboratory equipment, and the buildings are often not in good condition. I`m sure that If we manage to The self control, we will give up hobbies, sports, ans social life. Our educational system needs to be well organized ,before it spends on our children .   

Welcom to my world

• Each morning when I open my eyes I say to myself: I, not events, have the power to make me happy or unhappy today. I can choose which it shall be. Yesterday is dead, tomorrow hasn't arrived yet. I have just one day, today, and I'm going to be happy in it.

•  Knowledge of what is possible is the beginning of happiness.

• If you want to be happy, set a goal that commands your thoughts, liberates your energy, and inspires your hopes.

The second draft

  *Every country has its own educational system. Educational system  is a mirror that reflects the culture ,social structure, and values of any country. According to this system ,we can determine our students` levels. If we want our students to be good , we will need a well organized educational system. But If we want them to be bad , we will need for sure an unorganized educational system. For example Egypt(my country) is a great country with a specific educational system. This system cannot be the same to any other country. 

            *Educational system in Egypt has a lot of advantages ans disadvantages. On the one hand, one of the advantages is that education is  free in Egypt. People don`t have to give schools any money . They only buy the books of the subjects and even if they have enough money, they can easily take or borrow old books for free. In Egypt, older people have the opportunity to attend college, because Egyptians believe that "you are never too late to learn".

             *On the other hand,educational system in Egypt has also several drawbacks,such as, The number of students in the class is very big. Every class room has more than 40 students and the teachers need to keep their eyes on all the students at the same time,and make sure that all of them understood the lesson. There are also difficult exams for students at secondary schools. Every year students argue these exams.

                *In my point of view , Egypt has a bad educational system that will lead to its destruction . Education should support national unity and lead to social, economical, and cultural improvement of the people . But in Egypt , we don`t have that type of education. We don`t have enough teachers or laboratory equipment, and the buildings are often not in good condition. I`m sure that If we manage to The self control, we will give up hobbies, sports, ans social life. Our educational system needs to be well organized ,before it spends on our children .   

The wisdom of the day:

• It's only when we truly know and understand that we have a limited time on earth -- and that we have no way of knowing when our time is up -- that we will begin to live each day to the fullest, as if it was the only one we had.

• When I hear somebody says, "Life is hard," I am always tempted to ask, "Compared to what?"