The first draft :public and private universities

                    *Do you prefer a public or a private university? . It is a very important question,because your life depends on the answer of this question. The number of public universities  in Egypt are much more than private universities. However , students begins to attend private university rather than public university. Private universities have special requirements that is not available to some students in Egypt. but parents try very hard to provide these requirements to enter their sons into private university. Other parents don`t like private university at all. That a very personal choice ,depending on student`s needs and interests

              On one hand, public university has a lot of advantages . One of its advantages is that students only pay registration fees.There is no selective admission in public university . Students depends on their degrees in secondary school to enter one of the public universities. One of its disadvantages is that your application must be completed on time or early ,or you will not enter this year . It is much harder to get personal attention from staff or faculty when needed. It means that the number of students in public university is very big. 

                       On the other hand , private university has a lot of advantages such as: The class rooms are small , better financial aid and more scholarships. It has a policy to help students get high paying jobs as soon as they graduate.It is much easier to get personal attention from staff or faculty when needed. Private university also has disadvantages . It is much more expensive than public university. In private university you might or might not like the students selected.

                      In my point of view, private university is better than public university.As in private university ,the hours of studying are very short . Students graduate with a certificate of experience. The doctors are from all over the world and  professional. Different types of scientific and educational facilities are available in them. private university helps us (as students) to find a suitable job as soon as we graduate.This is our most important goal from learning and private universities can achieve our goals. that is why I prefer private university.

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Public and Private universities(Out line)

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Introduction:

• Do you prefer public or private universities ?
• It is a very personal choice ,depending on your needs and interests.

Body:

• what are the advantages and disadvantages of private university?
• what are the advantages and dis advantages of public university?

Conclusion:

• My point of view. 
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The final draft

    Pollution is quickly becoming a serious problem all over the world,in the air, the water, the soil, and many other ways.The air pollution in Egypt is a matter of serious concern. Air pollution is the material ,whether chemicals, particulates, or biological materials, that is introduced into the atmosphere by humans or human products.This is starting to have adverse effects and causes on the environment such as causing acid rain ,smog, and a wide variety of health probl

Air pollution occurs when toxins and contaminants are emitted into the atmosphere. Not only is the earth affected by air pollution , but it causes health issues. Most people think that air pollution is a problem that only environmentalists worry about , but the sad fact is it is a reality that we all have to face. We cause more problems every day than we come up with solutions. 

           Air pollution is caused by a wide variety of things such as:  Factories burn fossil fuels which cause air pollution. The burning of oil and coal contributes to smog. this air pollution destroys plants ,damages buildings.Petroleum releases hydrocarbons and various particulates that pollute the air. Power lines also create air pollution . Radioactive also causes air pollution . Mining operations causes air pollution by releasing a variety of particles. The extremely old vehicles cause the carbon present in fuel to react with oxygen ineffectively during burning , producing carbon monoxide. Industrial facilities such as factories and plants emit toxic gases into the atmosphere. Also burning solid and agricultural waste cause air pollution. 

           Air pollution causes a number of effects that become wide and large day after day. Such as environmental effects that acid rain forms when gases like dioxide and nitrogen oxide react with chemicals in the atmosphere to form acidic compounds . Acid rain can harm drinking water and our life . Carbon monoxide removes oxygen from the bloodstream and causes things like fatigue, headache, and disorientation. Skin diseases are caused from radiation. Smog represents the integration of smoke and fog.It can damage the lungs, cause breathing problems and affect the nose and eyes . Air pollution leads to a common phenomenon known as "The green house". The holes in the ozone layer increase the exposure to the sun`s harmful rays. If the ozone layer is depleted enough , the sun will begin to burn the earth , causing problems and death for all living things. 

             Many different methods of clarifying and improving our air are being tested every year. The best measure to improve our air is to eliminate fossil fuels and replace the internal-burning engine. Fossil fuels are burned and used as a source of energy . New technologies are trying to use emissions from fossil fuel generation by converting the captured CO2 into products such as chemicals, carbonates, plastics, fuels, building materials ,and other aspect of carbon capture. We also can convert rice husks into bio-gas for domestic use. We should provide simple environmental awareness . Activating policies dealing with air pollution and climate change. Triggering regular planting campaigns around Egypt.

             As humans, we are responsible for the damage we do, and if we do not find a way to clear the world we live on, we will not have our natural resources for very long , This is a problem we have to worry about no matter where we live. Air pollution can cause diseases and problems and even death to people . If air pollution is not put into consider, it could pose many risks and dangerous , both environmental and physiologically . However, air pollution has grown so much, the earth can no longer clean all of it.

Air Pollution In Egypt

            Pollution is quickly becoming a serious problem all over the world,in the air, the water, the soil, and many other ways.The air pollution in Egypt is a matter of serious concern. Air pollution is the material ,whether chemicals, particulates, or biological materials, that is introduced into the atmosphere by humans or human products.This is starting to have adverse effects and causes on the environment such as causing acid rain ,smog, and a wide variety of health problems . Air pollution occurs when toxins and contaminants are emitted into the atmosphere. Not only is the earth affected by air pollution , but it causes health issues. Most people think that air pollution is a problem that only environmentalists worry about , but the sad fact is it is a reality that we all have to face. We cause more problems every day than we come up with solutions. 
           Air pollution is caused by a wide variety of things such as: Factories burn fossil fuels which cause air pollution. The burning of oil and coal contributes to smog. this air pollution destroys plants ,damages buildings.Petroleum release hydrocarbons and various particulates that pollute the air. Power lines also creates air pollution . Radioactive fallout causes air pollution from the nuclear energy dispersed which is a dust. Mining operations causes air pollution by releasing a variety of particles. The extremely old vehicles cause the carbon present in fuel to react with oxygen ineffectively during combustion , producing carbon monoxide. Industrial facilities such as factories and plants emit toxic gases into the atmosphere. Also burning solid and agricultural waste cause air pollution. 
           Air pollution causes a number of effects that become wide and large day after day. Such as environmental effects that acid rain forms when gases like dioxide and nitrogen oxide react with chemicals in the atmosphere to form acidic compounds . Acid rain can harm drinking water and our life . Carbon monoxide removes oxygen from the bloodstream and causes things life fatigue, headache, and disorientation. Skin disease are caused from radiation. Smog represents the integration of smoke and fog.It can damage the lungs, cause breathing problems and affect the nose and eyes . Air pollution leads to a common phenomenon known as "The green house"effect on the planet. The holes in the ozone layer increases the exposure to the sun`s harmful rays. If the ozone layer is depleted enough , the sun will begin to burn the earth , causing problems and death for all living things. 
             Many different methods of clarifying and improving our air are being tested every year. The best measure to improve our air is to eliminate fossil fuels and replace the internal-combustion engine. Fossil fuels are burned and used as a sources of energy . New technologies are trying to use emissions from fossil fuel generation by converting the captured CO2 into products such as chemicals, carbonates, plastics, fuels, building materials ,and other aspect of carbon capture. We also can convert rice husks into bio-gas for domestic use. We should provide simple environmental awareness . Activating policies dealing with air pollution and climate change. Triggering regular planting campaigns around Egypt.
             As human, we are responsible for the damage we do, and if we do not find a way to clear the world we live on, we will not have our natural resources for very long , This is a problem we have to worry about no matter where we live. Air pollution can causes diseases and problems and even death to people . If air pollution is not put into remissions, it could pose many risks and dangerous , both environmental and physiologically . The earth is great at cleaning the air on its own . However, air pollution has grown so much, the earth can no longer clean all of it.

The causes & effects of pollution in Egypt

Introduction

• What is air pollution?
• The air pollution in Egypt is a matter of serious concern.

Air pollution is caused by a wide variety of things:  

• Factories
• Petroleum
• Power lines
• Mining operations
• Transportation
• Industrial
• Burning solid and agricultural waste

Effects:  

• Environmental effects
• Health concerns 
• Smog
• Large amount of the  green house effect
• Physiologically effects
• Climate changes
• Ozone

Solutions:

• Eliminate fossil fuels
• Replace the internal-combustion
• Converting CO2 into other useful forms
• Converting rice husks into bio- gas for domestic use
• Providing simple environmental awareness
• Triggering regular planting campaigns around Egypt
• Establishing a frame work for collective action that balances urgency with equity is the starting point for avoiding dangerous climate change.

Conclusion: 

•   The earth is great at cleaning the air on its town . However, air pollution has grown so much,the earth can no longer clean all of it.

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