The first draft:my dream job

            

          *It is very important to find your dream job. Everyone has to choose or determine their dream job . What kind of job they want?. After determining the job , they started to have the right education for it. For example: If you want to be a doctor, you must study medicine. To find your dream job isn`t very easy, but it needs a lot of work , study and specific skills. Nowadays,Jobs require specific skills like computer skills and speaking a foreign language. If you can`t find your dream job, you can go to a career counselor to help you .

        *My dream job is to be a translator. I hope that I can work as a translator especially from English to Arabic. As i love English so much. So i decided to study at the faculty of education in English department. I think my education in this faculty will help me a lot to find my dream job. I know that my study isn`t enough and i need a lot of courses to be profession. But i will keep trying and studying to achieve my dream. There are a lot of ways to find my own job. For example : I can use the websites. If you use the internet , you will find more and more empl0oyers are advertising job openings on their computer websites . You can choose your job freely.

         *To find a job , especially your dream job, is varies from country to country and from person to person. There is generally less job in the world and that is because of the decrease in manufacturing jobs. So many people have to take over their fathers in their jobs.Don`t be upset and give up.Try to know what kind of job you want, and make sure that you have the right education for it. You can`t find your job without suffering and studying.

My draem job(the out line)

Introduction:

• what kind of job you want?
• Do you have the right education for it?

Body:

• My own dream job.
• Work as a translator.
• How can i achieve my dream.

Conclusion:

• To find a job it varies from country  to country.
• It is important to discover your dream job.

success Quotes

• No road is too long for him who advances slowly and does not hurry, and no attainment is beyond his reach who equips himself with patience to achieve it.

• I don't believe you have to be better than everybody else. I believe you have to be better than you ever thought you could be.

•  Success is a journey, not a destination. The doing is often more important than the outcome.

•  Making your mark on the world is hard. If it were easy, everybody would do it. But it's not. It takes patience, it takes commitment, and it comes with plenty of failure along the way. The real test is not whether you avoid this failure, because you won't. it's whether you let it harden or shame you into inaction, or whether you learn from it; whether you choose to persevere.

The final draft

  *Every country has its own educational system. Educational system  is a mirror that reflects the culture ,social structure, and values of any country. According to this system ,we can determine our students` levels. If we want our students to be good , we will need a well organized educational system. But If we want them to be bad , we will need for sure an unorganized educational system. For example Egypt(my country) is a great country with a specific educational system. This system cannot be the same to any other country. 

            *Educational system in Egypt has a lot of advantages ans disadvantages. On the one hand, one of the advantages is that education is  free in Egypt. People don`t have to give schools any money . They only buy the books of the subjects and even if they have enough money, they can easily take or borrow old books for free. In Egypt, older people have the opportunity to attend college, because Egyptians believe that "you are never too late to learn".

             *On the other hand,educational system in Egypt has also several drawbacks,such as, The number of students in the class is very big. Every class room has more than 40 students and the teachers need to keep their eyes on all the students at the same time,and make sure that all of them understood the lesson. There are also difficult exams for students at secondary schools. Every year students argue these exams.

                *In my point of view , Egypt has a bad educational system that will lead to its destruction . Education should support national unity and lead to social, economical, and cultural improvement of the people . But in Egypt , we don`t have that type of education. We don`t have enough teachers or laboratory equipment, and the buildings are often not in good condition. I`m sure that If we manage to The self control, we will give up hobbies, sports, ans social life. Our educational system needs to be well organized ,before it spends on our children .   

Welcom to my world

• Each morning when I open my eyes I say to myself: I, not events, have the power to make me happy or unhappy today. I can choose which it shall be. Yesterday is dead, tomorrow hasn't arrived yet. I have just one day, today, and I'm going to be happy in it.

•  Knowledge of what is possible is the beginning of happiness.

• If you want to be happy, set a goal that commands your thoughts, liberates your energy, and inspires your hopes.

The second draft

  *Every country has its own educational system. Educational system  is a mirror that reflects the culture ,social structure, and values of any country. According to this system ,we can determine our students` levels. If we want our students to be good , we will need a well organized educational system. But If we want them to be bad , we will need for sure an unorganized educational system. For example Egypt(my country) is a great country with a specific educational system. This system cannot be the same to any other country. 

            *Educational system in Egypt has a lot of advantages ans disadvantages. On the one hand, one of the advantages is that education is  free in Egypt. People don`t have to give schools any money . They only buy the books of the subjects and even if they have enough money, they can easily take or borrow old books for free. In Egypt, older people have the opportunity to attend college, because Egyptians believe that "you are never too late to learn".

             *On the other hand,educational system in Egypt has also several drawbacks,such as, The number of students in the class is very big. Every class room has more than 40 students and the teachers need to keep their eyes on all the students at the same time,and make sure that all of them understood the lesson. There are also difficult exams for students at secondary schools. Every year students argue these exams.

                *In my point of view , Egypt has a bad educational system that will lead to its destruction . Education should support national unity and lead to social, economical, and cultural improvement of the people . But in Egypt , we don`t have that type of education. We don`t have enough teachers or laboratory equipment, and the buildings are often not in good condition. I`m sure that If we manage to The self control, we will give up hobbies, sports, ans social life. Our educational system needs to be well organized ,before it spends on our children .   

The wisdom of the day:

• It's only when we truly know and understand that we have a limited time on earth -- and that we have no way of knowing when our time is up -- that we will begin to live each day to the fullest, as if it was the only one we had.

• When I hear somebody says, "Life is hard," I am always tempted to ask, "Compared to what?"

The first draft:Educational system in my country

         *Every country has its own educational system. Educational system  is a mirror that reflects the culture ,social structure, and values of any country. According to this system ,we can determine our students` levels. If we want our students to be good , we will need a well organized educational system. But If we want them to be bad , we will need for sure an unorganized educational system. For example Egypt(my country) is a great country with a specific educational system. This system cannot be the same to any other country. 

            *Educational system in Egypt has a lot of advantages ans disadvantages. On the one hand, one of the advantages is that education is for free in Egypt. People don`t have to give schools any money . They only buy the books of the subjects and even if they have enough money, they can easily take or borrow old books for free. In Egypt, older people have the opportunity to attend college, because Egyptians believe that "you are never too late to learn".

             *On the other hand,educational system in Egypt has also several drawbacks. Such as, The number of students in the class is very big. Every class room has more than 40 student and the teachers need to keep their eyes on all the students at the same time.And make sure that all of them understood the lesson. There are also difficult exams for students at secondary schools. Every year students argue these exams.

                *In my point of view , Egypt has a bad educational system that will lead to its destruction . Education should support national unity and lead to social, economical, and cultural improvement of the people . But in Egypt , we don`t have that type of education. We don`t have enough teachers or laboratory equipment, and the buildings are often not in good condition. I`m sure that If we manage to The self control, we will give up hobbies, sports, ans social life. Our educational system needs to be well organized ,before it spends on our children .   

The out line (Educational system in my country)

*Introduction:

• Every country has its own educational system
• Education system is a mirror
• For example my country Egypt

*Body:

The advantages of educational system in Egypt:

1. Education is free
2. Older people attend college

The disadvantages :

1. The number of students
2.  Difficult exams

*Conclusion:

• My own point of view

The final draft

*Do you prefer a public or a private university? . It is a very important question,because your life depends on the answer of this question. The number of public universities  in Egypt are much more than private universities. However , students begin to attend private universities rather than public universities. Private universities have special requirements that are not available to some students in Egypt. But parents try very hard to provide these requirements to make their sons enter into a private university. Other parents don`t like private universities at all. That is a very personal choice ,depending on student`s needs and interests

              On one hand,a public university has a lot of advantages . One of its advantages is that students only pay registration fees.There is no selective admission in public universities . Students depend on their degrees in secondary school to enter one of the public universities. One of its disadvantages is that your application must be completed on time or early ,or you will not enter this year . It is much harder to get personal attention from staff or faculty when needed. It means that the number of students in public university is very big. 

                       On the other hand , a private university has a lot of advantages such as: The class rooms are small , better financial aid and more scholarships. It has a policy to help students get high paying jobs as soon as they graduate.It is much easier to get personal attention from staff or faculty when needed. A Private university also has disadvantages . It is much more expensive than public university. In private university you might or might not like the students selected.

                      In my point of view, private university is better than public university.As in private university ,the hours of studying are very short . Students graduate with a certificate of experience. The doctors are from all over the world and  professional. Different types of scientific and educational facilities are available in them. private university helps us (as students) to find a suitable job as soon as we graduate.This is our most important goal from learning and private universities can achieve our goals. that is why I prefer private university.

Do you agree with me?   

The first draft :public and private universities

                    *Do you prefer a public or a private university? . It is a very important question,because your life depends on the answer of this question. The number of public universities  in Egypt are much more than private universities. However , students begins to attend private university rather than public university. Private universities have special requirements that is not available to some students in Egypt. but parents try very hard to provide these requirements to enter their sons into private university. Other parents don`t like private university at all. That a very personal choice ,depending on student`s needs and interests

              On one hand, public university has a lot of advantages . One of its advantages is that students only pay registration fees.There is no selective admission in public university . Students depends on their degrees in secondary school to enter one of the public universities. One of its disadvantages is that your application must be completed on time or early ,or you will not enter this year . It is much harder to get personal attention from staff or faculty when needed. It means that the number of students in public university is very big. 

                       On the other hand , private university has a lot of advantages such as: The class rooms are small , better financial aid and more scholarships. It has a policy to help students get high paying jobs as soon as they graduate.It is much easier to get personal attention from staff or faculty when needed. Private university also has disadvantages . It is much more expensive than public university. In private university you might or might not like the students selected.

                      In my point of view, private university is better than public university.As in private university ,the hours of studying are very short . Students graduate with a certificate of experience. The doctors are from all over the world and  professional. Different types of scientific and educational facilities are available in them. private university helps us (as students) to find a suitable job as soon as we graduate.This is our most important goal from learning and private universities can achieve our goals. that is why I prefer private university.

Do you agree with me?   

Public and Private universities(Out line)

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Introduction:

• Do you prefer public or private universities ?
• It is a very personal choice ,depending on your needs and interests.

Body:

• what are the advantages and disadvantages of private university?
• what are the advantages and dis advantages of public university?

Conclusion:

• My point of view. 
•  

The final draft

    Pollution is quickly becoming a serious problem all over the world,in the air, the water, the soil, and many other ways.The air pollution in Egypt is a matter of serious concern. Air pollution is the material ,whether chemicals, particulates, or biological materials, that is introduced into the atmosphere by humans or human products.This is starting to have adverse effects and causes on the environment such as causing acid rain ,smog, and a wide variety of health probl

Air pollution occurs when toxins and contaminants are emitted into the atmosphere. Not only is the earth affected by air pollution , but it causes health issues. Most people think that air pollution is a problem that only environmentalists worry about , but the sad fact is it is a reality that we all have to face. We cause more problems every day than we come up with solutions. 

           Air pollution is caused by a wide variety of things such as:  Factories burn fossil fuels which cause air pollution. The burning of oil and coal contributes to smog. this air pollution destroys plants ,damages buildings.Petroleum releases hydrocarbons and various particulates that pollute the air. Power lines also create air pollution . Radioactive also causes air pollution . Mining operations causes air pollution by releasing a variety of particles. The extremely old vehicles cause the carbon present in fuel to react with oxygen ineffectively during burning , producing carbon monoxide. Industrial facilities such as factories and plants emit toxic gases into the atmosphere. Also burning solid and agricultural waste cause air pollution. 

           Air pollution causes a number of effects that become wide and large day after day. Such as environmental effects that acid rain forms when gases like dioxide and nitrogen oxide react with chemicals in the atmosphere to form acidic compounds . Acid rain can harm drinking water and our life . Carbon monoxide removes oxygen from the bloodstream and causes things like fatigue, headache, and disorientation. Skin diseases are caused from radiation. Smog represents the integration of smoke and fog.It can damage the lungs, cause breathing problems and affect the nose and eyes . Air pollution leads to a common phenomenon known as "The green house". The holes in the ozone layer increase the exposure to the sun`s harmful rays. If the ozone layer is depleted enough , the sun will begin to burn the earth , causing problems and death for all living things. 

             Many different methods of clarifying and improving our air are being tested every year. The best measure to improve our air is to eliminate fossil fuels and replace the internal-burning engine. Fossil fuels are burned and used as a source of energy . New technologies are trying to use emissions from fossil fuel generation by converting the captured CO2 into products such as chemicals, carbonates, plastics, fuels, building materials ,and other aspect of carbon capture. We also can convert rice husks into bio-gas for domestic use. We should provide simple environmental awareness . Activating policies dealing with air pollution and climate change. Triggering regular planting campaigns around Egypt.

             As humans, we are responsible for the damage we do, and if we do not find a way to clear the world we live on, we will not have our natural resources for very long , This is a problem we have to worry about no matter where we live. Air pollution can cause diseases and problems and even death to people . If air pollution is not put into consider, it could pose many risks and dangerous , both environmental and physiologically . However, air pollution has grown so much, the earth can no longer clean all of it.

Air Pollution In Egypt

            Pollution is quickly becoming a serious problem all over the world,in the air, the water, the soil, and many other ways.The air pollution in Egypt is a matter of serious concern. Air pollution is the material ,whether chemicals, particulates, or biological materials, that is introduced into the atmosphere by humans or human products.This is starting to have adverse effects and causes on the environment such as causing acid rain ,smog, and a wide variety of health problems . Air pollution occurs when toxins and contaminants are emitted into the atmosphere. Not only is the earth affected by air pollution , but it causes health issues. Most people think that air pollution is a problem that only environmentalists worry about , but the sad fact is it is a reality that we all have to face. We cause more problems every day than we come up with solutions. 
           Air pollution is caused by a wide variety of things such as: Factories burn fossil fuels which cause air pollution. The burning of oil and coal contributes to smog. this air pollution destroys plants ,damages buildings.Petroleum release hydrocarbons and various particulates that pollute the air. Power lines also creates air pollution . Radioactive fallout causes air pollution from the nuclear energy dispersed which is a dust. Mining operations causes air pollution by releasing a variety of particles. The extremely old vehicles cause the carbon present in fuel to react with oxygen ineffectively during combustion , producing carbon monoxide. Industrial facilities such as factories and plants emit toxic gases into the atmosphere. Also burning solid and agricultural waste cause air pollution. 
           Air pollution causes a number of effects that become wide and large day after day. Such as environmental effects that acid rain forms when gases like dioxide and nitrogen oxide react with chemicals in the atmosphere to form acidic compounds . Acid rain can harm drinking water and our life . Carbon monoxide removes oxygen from the bloodstream and causes things life fatigue, headache, and disorientation. Skin disease are caused from radiation. Smog represents the integration of smoke and fog.It can damage the lungs, cause breathing problems and affect the nose and eyes . Air pollution leads to a common phenomenon known as "The green house"effect on the planet. The holes in the ozone layer increases the exposure to the sun`s harmful rays. If the ozone layer is depleted enough , the sun will begin to burn the earth , causing problems and death for all living things. 
             Many different methods of clarifying and improving our air are being tested every year. The best measure to improve our air is to eliminate fossil fuels and replace the internal-combustion engine. Fossil fuels are burned and used as a sources of energy . New technologies are trying to use emissions from fossil fuel generation by converting the captured CO2 into products such as chemicals, carbonates, plastics, fuels, building materials ,and other aspect of carbon capture. We also can convert rice husks into bio-gas for domestic use. We should provide simple environmental awareness . Activating policies dealing with air pollution and climate change. Triggering regular planting campaigns around Egypt.
             As human, we are responsible for the damage we do, and if we do not find a way to clear the world we live on, we will not have our natural resources for very long , This is a problem we have to worry about no matter where we live. Air pollution can causes diseases and problems and even death to people . If air pollution is not put into remissions, it could pose many risks and dangerous , both environmental and physiologically . The earth is great at cleaning the air on its own . However, air pollution has grown so much, the earth can no longer clean all of it.

The causes & effects of pollution in Egypt

Introduction

• What is air pollution?
• The air pollution in Egypt is a matter of serious concern.

Air pollution is caused by a wide variety of things:  

• Factories
• Petroleum
• Power lines
• Mining operations
• Transportation
• Industrial
• Burning solid and agricultural waste

Effects:  

• Environmental effects
• Health concerns 
• Smog
• Large amount of the  green house effect
• Physiologically effects
• Climate changes
• Ozone

Solutions:

• Eliminate fossil fuels
• Replace the internal-combustion
• Converting CO2 into other useful forms
• Converting rice husks into bio- gas for domestic use
• Providing simple environmental awareness
• Triggering regular planting campaigns around Egypt
• Establishing a frame work for collective action that balances urgency with equity is the starting point for avoiding dangerous climate change.

Conclusion: 

•   The earth is great at cleaning the air on its town . However, air pollution has grown so much,the earth can no longer clean all of it.

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